orchid ode poetry prompts – ode to loss

November 15, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write from inside walls.

spider work image: mcylouie

spider work
image: mcylouie

ode to loss

woke up this
morn with crater
in heart where
loved ones linger
gathering bone courage
for row long
boats cross sorrow
river when they’re
gone spiders lace
space weave scars
into fresh black
earth where heart
can find footing
walk beat again

scar orchid scar

orchid poetry prompt – vermilion bird of south – leaves

November 4, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

section iv: leaves

pistil poetry prompt:

write from a protector’s bird’s eye view

vermilion fire bird photo credit: belvin louie

vermilion fire bird
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to general of the south

vermilion enigma bird
renanthera queen
of summer fire south
dance between day
& night sowing
& reaping you bewitch
suitors gold splashed crown
wings come hither head & tail
feathers you are mercury
in cinnabar chinese
in red phoenix orchid
in rainforest carotene
in maple pepper
in red wedding sedan ash
in winged ascension ten suns
in fusang mulberry tree

feather orchid feather

 

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to backbulb

October 27, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write from a treasured stash.

orchid's backup band photo credit: belvin louie

orchid’s backup band
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to backbulb

they call me pseudo
bulb but nothing fake
about this crock

i kimchee provisions to
outrun manchurian
snow tigers. sympodial, i

beanpaste jars comb
pressed rows. true,
like any other son of a

rhizome i live to stampede
purple tundra free. until
cattleya drained my

watering hole swapped
me out for a younger belly
dancer now i’m backbulbed

where housewives ferment
skills where mothers go to
cry salt famine’s root cellar.

store orchid store

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to warp & weft

October 11, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write from an art or artisan’s point of view.

auntie jean's warpster weftster photo credit: mcylouie

auntie jean’s warpster weftster
photo credit: mcylouie

ode to warp & weft

phalanx of platelet collagen keratinocyte ambos. sunspots. keloid
polaroid. cutin subarin cork chorus. gives rough her texture.

twins skating on & under ice. mom’s green switch on wet skin.
growl that raises chicken flesh. lava chimney. brownie smoke signals.

kid knees every asphalt day. thorn ambush. hotter the mad, deeper
the needle. tax collector’s stamp. stain rights—stop evictions!

relief map generation’s merit badges. liver spots who once erased
blackboard easy. invisible ink. where rivers delta to graft the new.

weave orchid weave

orchid ode prompts – ode to judgment

September 28, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

slice through smoke.

sword dancer gangneung dano festival 2009 photo credit: mcylouie

dancer gangneung dano festival 2009
photo credit: mcylouie

ode to judgment

1.
i drive sword
thru & thru
enemy’s neck
kill heart kill time
kill lungs kill soul’s abode
now upstart gun gods
fling false falcons
rain fire on
wedding parties
even one-eyed raven
could see filiagree
bride’s veil
have their generals forgotten
how to drive sword
thru & thru
armor gristle bone
drink goblet
of man’s character
from his dying eyes?

2.
judge man
not by his answers

but by his questions
said confucius

his bamboo
rod no less severe

than jehovah’s
flood justice

what happens when
i judge others by

my questions not
theirs are not

locusts frogs blood
rivers far behind?

pestilence orchid pestilence

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to rice

September 23, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write a poem to a staple of the human family.

rice field in jackson louie's dai gong village, toisan, china photo credit: belvin louie

rice field in jackson louie’s dai gong village, toisan, china
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to rice

guangdong province, toisan county
nam yang & dai gong villages

orchid you are jasmine me
savor how my sticky white
gives black salt beans bite
I tasteshift into any lover

your tongue wants me be
steam me explode me gird
your hips with my surrender
just few muscle grains my

power come ooze toe paddies
backs fled beneath my dove
flesh find me green as
dragonfly pillows cricket bandits

hunger’s fortress wall sheath your
veins in mud’s rebirth farmer fingers
scratch scalp lullaby sigh grow
thresh me brown as night

soil of ox people who
waste nothing green why itchy
with desire feet surrender ululating
waters for asphalt desert horns

insult rice wolf nights all left
who dragon seeds once were
now each bite jasmine me
remember place where rice begins

green orchid green

note: this poem first appeared in Ranting Tiger Thundering Bunny: Words & Art Together, by miriam and nguyen louie.

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to sugarcane

August 27, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write a poem from the point of view of a plant or mineral that humans have processed into pleasure, gain and/or pain.

sugar's trusty mocha-machete photo credit: belvin louie

sugar’s trusty mocha-machete
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to sugarcane

a belvin, mi mocha-machetero millonario

swing low, chariot machete. slice me
at syrup root, sweet slavery. where you
bow in supplication. i am honey bearing
reed slashing faces peppering ankles
with fire ant addicts. older than opium

i am giant grass sister to rice & sorghum.
brother to wheat orchids & corn
pyramids. i am crystal trafficker
of horse intensity. i am shoulder pole
who shanghaied indian africans arab chinese

across whipback trails of europe’s craving.
close your eyes. hear master cutter
ancestors fell me in each single dance
motion chop don’t stop rhythm.
i barrel sweat into rum. i sugar

skins shoulders deep brown.
fire sky sticky scent of molasses.
sprinkle me over your wounds
intensify sucking sound
of pain’s pleasure.

swing orchid swing

note re image: check out belvin’s heavily used mocha, a machete originally more shaped like a rectangular chinese cleaver. it was used for chopping cane stalks close to the ground where the sugar was most concentrated.

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to throat

August 16, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

sing eulogy through plant or animal anatomy.

gil scott-heron, regency ballroom, san francisco, 10/3/09 photo credit: adam turner

gil scott-heron, regency ballroom, san francisco 10/3/09 * photo credit: adam turner cc

ode to throat

after gil scott-heron

1.
rote blue dog
note eve’s rib can’t
music. moon howls
tramp loss. harp hangs.
cave drowns
moat mind knots.
sewers alley. jail tin
cup rots. mouth rains dead
swallows. heart windows
shutter. when my rivers
gag, chokehold
needs no baton.
sliced apple
chords no can
yowl betrayal
cormorant faith. how
long hanged harp
swing mute before
dogheart paddles
whale ribs
to shore?

2.
brother prophet
hair afire
before black
earth kisses
coffin you lay down
book of gil
scripture songs death
sea scrolls scat stomp shout
sorrow’s crystal wings
you couple poetry & blues
until hunter finally
ensnares you
patron saint
of runaways
& throats
smooth
be your road

sing orchid sing

note: see saint gil’s obit in the guardian for pieces of the man.

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to bamboo

August 4, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

invite guest plant or animal to stand in as teacher.

bamboo you photo: mcylouie

bamboo you
photo: mcylouie

ode to bamboo

monkey of 72 transformations
cricket thicket panda pantry
gunpowder tube for dynamite partisans
bones migrants swing building emperor’s cities

heart of beasts she tickles
drums sonorous with their skins
hallowed flute bones marimba
pulse of jungle veins
sweep mind empty as
ten thousand meditations

she is to summer as chrysanthemum
to autumn plum-blossom to
winter orchid to spring

when leaf blades shudder
in arc of fear’s flight
don’t run past blind
study her flex
more than useful
more than music

she knows when
to be hurtling spear
to be forest’s dragon legs
to be surrender’s serenity prayer
there is nothing left to defend

supple orchid supple

orchid odes poetry prompts–ode to nüwa

July 28, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write a poem to a fixer or cleaning lady—or both. repeat the first line of each stanza—then riff. repeat-riff. repeat-riff. for unity & depth of her skill.

Goddess Nüwa (女媧). Artist: Xiao Yuncong (蕭雲從) 1596-1673

Goddess Nüwa (女媧).
Artist: Xiao Yuncong (蕭雲從) 1596-1673 /public domainPublicDomainSymbol

ode to nüwa

nüwa fixer goddess of broke things
she & bro-hubby fuxi created chickens
on moonday, dogs on fireday, sheep on waterday
pigs cows horses on tree gold and earth
days. but on sunday no jehovahesque rest
she made mud people of earth & rain
who got busy testing & cracking her creations

nüwa fixer goddess of broke things
she sealed sky when gong gong, god of water
bashed his head against mountain pillar bracing sky
after lost battle for throne to god of fire,
zhu rong. missing a stem, sky staggered
northwest throwing earth southeast kicking
kingdom off center unleashing flood fire famine
man-eating beasts to devour nüwa’s people

nüwa fixer goddess of broke things
she cut legs beloved giant turtle ao
for struts to replace wrecked pillars
she patched heaven’s wall with stones
of seven colors but ever since heaven’s
spine broken sun moon stars
tilt northwest & rivers southeast

nüwa fixer goddess of broke things
during FLOOD she killed brave black dragon
to fill earth & dammed waters with reed
ash mortar she trained generations of daughters
like our ah-mah how to mortar rainbows
with sorrow stems seven color stones
for patch hurt from drowning rage of men

legs orchid legs

Additional notes re image: Original from Tianwentu (天問圖), imprint of the Qing dynasty (1644-1912); currently located in Taipei, National Palace Museum; and reproduced in The Mysterious Path to Immortality. Heaven, Earth, and Beyond: Prints and Illustrations of Confucian, Buddhist, and Taoist Figures.

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to xylem & phloem

July 19, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write a poem to the magic power of flesh.

xylem & phloem @ work photo credit: belvin louie

xylem & phloem @ work
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to xylem & phloem

young farmers, your calves ripple trees. your
vascular cords, chestnut pith. you are thorn’s
backbone. corn’s fifth column. where trees
go to book. soldiers to stipule. your phloem
shelters food banks. your xylem pipes
quinine camphor candor. cinnamon desire.

last shall be first, and first, last.

after rubber, cambrium chariots break siege
after elevator nectar, femur hammers
after blue dragon, uncork grapevines
after winter, bark epic orchid uprising
after walk on milk stems, bind marrow
after tagger ancestors, bomb reed paper
after scrawl caishu script, scowl bodhidharma
after stilt fishermen’s huts, weave nets
after rabbit grass tunnels, hemp nakedness
after scale beanstalk, hurricane palmera prayers

last orchid last

note for nerds: xylem is the water-
transporting vascular tissue in plants;
phloem is x’s food-packing tissue sibling.

orchid odes poetry prompts – ode to monocotyledons

July 11, 2016 No Comments Miriam Uncategorized

orchid odes poetry prompts

pistil poetry prompt:

write poem that taps into the power of a number.

power of one photo credit: belvin louie

power of one
photo credit: belvin louie

ode to monocotyledons

                      after lucille clifton

solo
seed leaf sun
stretch
never lonely
wretch
among 10,000 orchid clans
60,000 spear villages
glade
side mountain cane
brake
rice corn ginger
black
bamboo goat grass
i’m a farmer not a fighter
unsheathe my
blade
make own
shade
james brown
me
moon & back
long as you
land
on the
one

clan orchid clan

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